tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3155303447550877640.post417969692649342675..comments2024-02-21T02:34:52.090+13:00Comments on June : Auckland Bus StrikesPBS Blogshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11241848545582443830noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3155303447550877640.post-53566292291375300752016-04-07T13:50:07.394+12:002016-04-07T13:50:07.394+12:00Hi Mrs Donaldson,
Thank you very much for the feed...Hi Mrs Donaldson,<br />Thank you very much for the feed back and hopefully next Jane and I can remember next time.<br /><br />Yours Sincerely,<br />JuneJunehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17769583056660881760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3155303447550877640.post-91530589772723784182016-04-05T19:37:33.121+12:002016-04-05T19:37:33.121+12:00Well done June and Jane. You have explained the 5...Well done June and Jane. You have explained the 5Ws of the current event. You have also explained the point of view of the bus drivers and public, using the word 'because' to help you. Next time remember to proof read your work to check it makes sense.Chelsea Donaldsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04022152283811252103noreply@blogger.com