tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3155303447550877640.post5837382958031789648..comments2024-02-21T02:34:52.090+13:00Comments on June : Writing An Orientation - Juanita & JunePBS Blogshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11241848545582443830noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3155303447550877640.post-41396154237263135042016-03-09T21:45:38.050+13:002016-03-09T21:45:38.050+13:00Well done June and Juanita. Your orientation clear...Well done June and Juanita. Your orientation clearly tells us the setting, characters and problem. Your use of dialogue hooks me in and makes me want to keep reading. Your choice of adjectives helps to enhance the mood and scariness of the bear.Chelsea Donaldsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04022152283811252103noreply@blogger.com