This blog is a record of my learning from Panmure Bridge Primary School through to Tamaki College.
Well done June and Juanita. Your orientation clearly tells us the setting, characters and problem. Your use of dialogue hooks me in and makes me want to keep reading. Your choice of adjectives helps to enhance the mood and scariness of the bear.
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Well done June and Juanita. Your orientation clearly tells us the setting, characters and problem. Your use of dialogue hooks me in and makes me want to keep reading. Your choice of adjectives helps to enhance the mood and scariness of the bear.
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