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Friday, 13 May 2016

Shoe Narrative ( Writing )


Shoe Narrative


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As I was purchased from the shop I was living happily with my owner. When he first put me on I was really excited because I have never been worn before. The next day he put me on, I was so surprised because I had no idea of where he was going to take me, he went outside and he started walking, we went somewhere to place that I couldn’t even describe, he was walking and I was sang along, then I stopped because there was something ahead of me that was calling me to come closer, I was trying to stop him but it was to late I went under the mud it was horrible, I couldn’t breath. First I couldn’t even survive through this hideous mud, I was scared of what he would do to me. I was covered in this  disgusting mud, while he was walking I was crying for help, then he came to this interesting thing I could not describe it but it did not look nice, it barked, I got scared it came all the way up to me and dribbled on me, “Eww that’s disgusting.” Than I turned around, and I saw my owner coming , he picked me up and put me into the locker room which was filled of shoes, then they started talking to me. I could smell the disgusting smell of the dog, I could hear the people talking on the little objects, I could taste the slimy dog dribble inside my mouth, I could see the people walking past me texting on their little objects , then I could feel my owner touching me with his muddy hands. Then these other people that looked old saw me and told my owner to go and put the shoes in your locker where it was supposed to be, then he put me in his locker and these friendly shoes was talking to me again, I talked and talked and talked until I was able to get to know them better. Then after awhile I was able to call them “ My Family.”

Today I had worked collaboratively with my friend Afu. For this we had 15 minutes to write this paragraph and had a few couple of minutes to prove read with Afu. After this we had to plan of what was going to be in this paragraph. Than we had go back to back to make this more interesting. After that we were timed and than we had to write one sentence another.

8 comments:

Robyn Anderson said...

What a fabulous picture you girls have painted with words! I really like the part where you describe how you couldn't breathe after you ended up covered in the mud. Please go back and check that you have used the correct punctuation to show the end of an idea.

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