Thursday, 4 August 2016

Hoverbike Poster - June & Jane

This week my sister and I have collaborated together to work on this poster. For this we had to make a post about doing adverts and for this we had to advertise that hover bike for others to buy it. ( not in real life) We had put some more colours and some information about this hover bike. 


Robyn Anderson said...

Well done June. I can see clearly which persuasive language features you have used to hook your audience in but when I read your blurb I see that you haven't drawn our attention to them. Please reword your blurb so that it identifies the persuasive language features that you used. This will help your readers make a stronger connection to your task.

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